LAUGHING HARD…at ScreenCraft review of my animated movie script, based on Ryunosuke Akutagawa Buddhist novel. While the reviewer acknowledges that “…the script is high on poeticism, …spirit changing bodies…” (vv: read reincarnation), she also advises “…For example, a green heron startles Wei with its cry on page 4, but what if the heron flew into Wei and inadvertently attacked him?” Yeah, right, shot sort of — blood gushing from his eye —
